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Imperfect Paradise

  • Writer: Michael Shaw
    Michael Shaw
  • Nov 3
  • 1 min read
Short poem titled “The Imperfect Paradise,” illustrated and displayed on a bright, multicolored abstract background with flowing paint shapes and bold contrast.

Reflections

A short poem about gratitude and imperfection, Imperfect Paradise celebrates the frustration and joy that come from living with life’s everyday mishaps. The poem begins with a candid admission: Nothing perfect ever seems to be. Yet, rather than lamenting flaws—the crabgrass on the lawn, the smudge on the countertop—the speaker looks at them with a tender smile; they are familiar parts of a shared life.


These small, domestic details become metaphors for human imperfection. The poem gently mocks the urge to control or perfect everything. Things will go wrong. The images reinforce this unavoidable reality—the typo in a letter, the dent on a car door. The question Might we have done better? acknowledges self-doubt, but the poet does not dwell there.


In the final stanza, the focus shifts toward acceptance. The poet recognizes imperfection as the natural texture of real life: My soul has ceased to care. Love redeems the flawed world we live in. The closing line, Your smile saved me from despair, suggests that a loving relationship or friendship can transform ordinary, imperfect life into a sanctuary for spiritual well-being.


The message is clear: there is no paradise that is perfect, but the imperfect life we build can still become a paradise.


Affirmation

I let go of the need for perfection. I find contentment in the small flaws of daily life. With the right perspective, I can create my own imperfect paradise.

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